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People have different views about whether we are more or less dependent on others nowadays. In my view, modern life forces us to be more independent than people were in the past.
There are two main reasons why it could be argued that we are more dependent on each other now. Firstly, life is more complex and difficult, especially because the cost of living has increased so dramatically. For example, young adults tend to rely on their parents for help when buying a house. Property prices are higher than ever, and without help it would be impossible for many people to pay a deposit and a mortgage. Secondly, people seem to be more ambitious nowadays, and they want a better quality of life for their families. This means that both parents usually need to work full-time, and they depend on support from grandparents and babysitters for child care.
However, I would agree with those who believe that people are more independent these days. In most countries, families are becoming smaller and more dispersed, which means that people cannot count on relatives as much as they used to. We also have more freedom to travel and live far away from our home towns. For example, many students choose to study abroad instead of going to their local university, and this experience makes them more independent as they learn to live alone. Another factor in this growing independence is technology, which allows us to work alone and from any part of the world.
In conclusion, while there are some reasons to believe that people now depend on each other more, my own view is that we are more independent than ever.
The pie charts compare visitors’ responses to a survey about customer service at the Parkway Hotel in 2005 and in 2010.
It is clear that overall customer satisfaction increased considerably from 2005 to 2010. While most hotel guests rated customer service as satisfactory or poor in 2005, a clear majority described the hotel’s service as good or excellent in 2010.
Looking at the positive responses first, in 2005 only 5% of the hotel’s visitors rated its customer service as excellent, but this figure rose to 28% in 2010. Furthermore, while only 14% of guests described customer service in the hotel as good in 2005, almost three times as many people gave this rating five years later.
With regard to negative feedback, the proportion of guests who considered the hotel’s customer service to be poor fell from 21% in 2005 to only 12% in 2010. Similarly, the proportion of people who thought customer service was very poor dropped from 15% to only 4% over the 5-year period. Finally, a fall in the number of ‘satisfactory’ ratings in 2010 reflects the fact that more people gave positive responses to the survey in that year.
It is noticeable that multinational cooperation has become increasingly common, and it makes contribution to global integration instead of international isolation. Some people claim that the primary merit of international cooperation is protecting the environment while others argue that the major strength is promoting worldwide business. Before present my position, the essay aims to critically discuss both views.
It is no doubt that environmental protection needs the global efforts. In order to find an effective solution to pollution, governments from all over the world have to make stricter laws and regulations on the emission of polluted substances. Furthermore, international cooperation makes it possible for scientists to launch research seminars to exchange their diverse and innovative ideas, from which they may gain the inspiration to design more clean energy like wind and solar energy and address environmental problems.
International integration plays an indispensable role in developing prosperous business, which support the other side’s opinion. On the one hand, with the help of advanced technology and professional skills offered by developed nations, developing countries become capable of harnessing adequate resources and achieving the goal of maximizing business profits as soon as possible. On the other hand, more employment opportunities are created on the products-supply sides and a better quality of life is shared by skill-receiving ends. Admittedly, without economic collaboration on such a massive scale, a huge number of countries would be likely to be embroiled in starvation except for the few blessed with fertile lands and wise governmental leadership.
Judging from the detailed analysis on both sides, I think both aspects are extremely significant during the process of propelling global progress. However, it is high time that multinational collaboration paid more attention to environmental issues to catch up with the pace of global business development.
雅思大作文模板：父母育儿课程
New parents should attend a parenting course to learn how to bring up their children well, do you agree or disagree?
The charts compare the sources of electricity in Australia and France in the years 1980 and 2000. During these years electricity production almost doubled, rising from 100 units to 170 in Australia, and from 90 to 180 units in France.
In 1980 Australia used coal as the main electricity source (50 units) and the remainder was produced from natural gas, hydro power (each producing 20 units) and oil (which produced only 10 units). By 2000, coal had become the fuel for more than 75% of electricity produced and only hydro power continued to be another significant source supplying approximately 20%.
In contrast, France used coal as a source for only 25 units of electricity in 1980, which was matched by natural gas. The remaining 40 units were produced largely from oil and nuclear power, with hydro power contributing only 5 units. But by 2000 nuclear power, which was not used at all in Australia, had developed into the main source, producing almost 75% of electricity, at 126 units, while coal and oil together produced only 50 units. Other sources were no longer significant.
Overall, it is clear that by 2000 these two countries relied on different principal fuel sources: Australia relied on coal and France on nuclear power.
ou should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Some people prefer to plan activities for their free time very choose not to make any plans at all for their free time.
Compare the benefits of planning free-time activities with the benefits of not making plans.Which do you prefer - planning or not planning for your leisure time? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your choice.
You should write at least 250 answer: Nowadays people have so many things to do that they almost always do not have enough time for it.
When we go to bed we carefully think and plan our next day and it continues day in and day out.We wake up,recollect our checklist with things to do and in a few minutes we are already in a car on our way to the office.
Often people do not have time for themselves.So,when people have some spare time they want to use it wisely.
Some people prefer to plan activities for their free time very carefully.However,others prefer not to make any plans.
In this essay I will analyze both cases and present my view in favor of planning free-time activities.From the one side,not making any plans and just letting the time pass by for some time have some benefits.
First of all,a person can just relax,enjoy the beautiful moments,spend his or her time with loved ones,watch a movie,listen to relaxing music,observe the flowers in bloom from the window,contemplate about his or her life and just slow down the pace of life.I think it is a very good way to eliminate ones stress and tension and just leave all troubles and worries behind.
From the other side,careful planning can bring many benefits too.First of all,one can travel.
However,traveling requires some planning to be made.For example,one most likely will need a hotel room.
So,the reservation should be made beforehand.Also,it is wise to check ones car to avoid breakdowns and have an uninterrupted worry-free trip.
Second of all,planning ones activities allows to spend ones free time the way he/she likes.For instance,if I want to play tennis on incoming week-end I will certainly make a reservation for a court because in this case I will not be disappointed with the waste of my time.
Personally,I prefer to make plans for my free time because it allows me to spend my vacation or week-ends the way I want sum up,I think careful planning allows people to derive maximum benefits from their free time.
However,I must confess sometimes I allow my self just to stay at home with my friends and family and not make any plans
It is true that medicines and other products are routinely tested on animals before they are cleared for human use. While I tend towards the viewpoint that animal testing is morally wrong, I would have to support a limited amount of animal experimentation for the development of medicines.
On the one hand, there are clear ethical arguments against animal experimentation. To use a common example of this practice, laboratory mice may be given an illness so that the effectiveness of a new drug can be measured. Opponents of such research argue that humans have no right to subject animals to this kind of trauma, and that the lives of all creatures should be respected. They believe that the benefits to humans do not justify the suffering caused, and that scientists should use alternative methods of research.
On the other hand, reliable alternatives to animal experimentation may not always be available. Supporters of the use of animals in medical research believe that a certain amount of suffering on the part of mice or rats can be justified if human lives are saved. They argue that opponents of such research might feel differently if a member of their own families needed a medical treatment that had been developed through the use of animal experimentation. Personally, I agree with the banning of animal testing for non-medical products, but I feel that it may be a necessary evil where new drugs and medical procedures are concerned.
In conclusion, it seems to me that it would be wrong to ban testing on animals for vital medical research until equally effective alternatives have been developed.
With the development of cities, more and more new buildings are appearing in the city. Some people claim that the government should ensure all the new buildings should be built in traditional styles. For me, I do not agree with this suggestion.
Undoubtedly, the old buildings can reflect our traditional culture and should be protected and built. They are the houses where the ancient people lived. By appreciating these old buildings, we can have a better understanding of our ancient culture and history.
However, I do not agree that all the new buildings should be built in traditional styles. First of all, a city’s culture identity consists of the past culture and the modern culture. While past culture can be represented by the traditional buildings, modern culture should be reflected by modern buildings. If all the new buildings are built in traditional styles, the modern culture may be lost in the city. Secondly, the style of the new building should be decided by a lot of factors such as location, function, and so on. For instance, it is impossible for us to build a modern shopping mall into traditional style, because there are a lot of famous brands inside. Thirdly, modern buildings can accommodate more people than traditional buildings, which can meet the increasing population.
Therefore, I agree that we should build some old buildings, but we should not build all the buildings into traditional styles. We should consider a lot of aspects before we make the final decision.
I am from Saint-Petersburg, Russia. I believe that building a large factory near my community has advantages as well as disadvantages. In the following paragraphs I will list basic benefits and losses that will be brought by a new factory.
For several reasons, I think that a new factory will not be a good addition to my neighborhood. First of all, factories often bring pollution. They are prone to contaminating the local air and water. Second of all, factories make noise. Another important aspect of building a new factory near by is that it will make the local traffic heavy. As a result of this, the amount of traffic congestions will increase, as well as contamination of the air. So, all these obviously will not make one's life happier and healthier in my community.
From the other side, I believe that a new factory will bring some advantages to my community. First of all, it will bring new job opportunities. Many specialists will be required to work there. Second of all, I think many local community facilities will have to be renovated to obtain reliable supply of water and electricity. So, some old pipes may be changed. Another important benefit of this is that the local roads in order to manage the increasing traffic will be rebuilt and widened.
However, I do not think that listed above benefits are worth all these troubles including water contamination and the constant pollution of air. From my point of view all factories must be built far from the people communities because they can be really harmful for people's health.
This line chart shows the changes in the proportion of the elderly people in three countries from 1940 till today. Moreover, it offers predictions for a period to 2040.
During the three score years, the USA generally outweighed Sweden in terms of the proportion of those aged 65 and over. But the gaps between have never been remarkable. In stark contrast, Sweden strikingly eclipsed Japan in this aspect evidenced by the fact that in 1940 the proportion for the USA was about 9%， clearly higher than 5% for Japan.
Whereas Japan experienced declines from 5% to 3% ， both Sweden and the USA climbed. Put it in detail, by the year 1983, the figures have peaked at 15% and 13% in the USA and Sweden respectively. Noticeably, in 1997 the proportion in the USA was equal to that in Sweden.
According to the forecast, from now on, all of the three countries will skyrocket although exceptions might happen. However, by 2040 the proportion will have peaked at 27%， 25%， and 23% in Japan, Sweden, and the USA respectively.
In sum, the three countries are different in the field under study.
Many young people today know more about international pop and movie stars than about famous people in the history in their country.Why is this?What can be done to increase young people’s interest in famous people in the history of their country?
今天许多年轻人对国际流行音乐和电影明星的了解比他们国家历史上的名人还要多。这是为什么呢？怎样做才能提高年轻人对本国历史上名人的兴趣？
类型
媒体类
题目
Many young people today know more about international pop and movie stars than about famous people in the history in their country.
Why is this?
What can be done to increase young people’s interest in famous people in the history of their country?
范文解析
本题讨论现在的年轻人对国际娱乐明星比对他们自己国家的名人感兴趣的原因以及如何提高年轻人对历史名人兴趣。题目类型是议论文的现象类题目， 题目的问法是“ Why is this? What can be done...”类型，可以采用4段式作文结构。
文章结构
P1：引入话题+指出原因
P2：指出主要原因之一：大众媒体过度宣传以及邀请国际娱乐明星做广告是引起这一现象的主要原因。
P3：指出其解决办法：鼓励媒体转变宣传历史名人而且国际娱乐明星；
P4：总结全文：重申原因和解决办法。
高分话题表达
Die-hand fans 铁杆粉丝
Prominent historical figures著名的历史名人
Contributor造成不良后果的因素
Bombard with提供大量。信息
Fanatical 狂热的
Reverse trend扭转局势
Shortcut捷径
Assume responsibility for承担责任
Commit..to (doing sth)致力于
Culprit 罪魁祸首
高分结构SVO, a/an (adj.) n. that SVO.概括性同位语
Bombarded with..., SVO.非谓语结构做原因状语
It is...that/who SVO.强调句型
Not just...but also平行结构
Without sth, S would not ... .介词短语做条件状语
What SVO 主语从句
范文(范文由小站出品)
An ever increasing number of the young these days are die-hard fans of international celebrities, such as pop and movie stars but unfortunately pay little attention to prominent historical figures in their own home country, an unhealthy but universal phenomenon that will take a heavy toll on those young people themselves as well as the society as a whole. The mass media is the principal contributor to this phenomenon.
现在越来越多的年轻人这些天是铁杆粉丝的国际名人，如流行音乐和电影明星但不幸的小注意著名历史人物在自己的祖国，不健康的，但普遍现象，将会造成严重的那些年轻人本身以及社会作为一个整体。大众传媒是造成这一现象的主要原因。
That media excessively expose popular shows that are exclusively about these pop stars on TV, the Internet, and instant information on phones and employ them advertise are mainly responsible for this. Bombarded with different information, especially the gossip, about famous stars anytime and anywhere, young people have thus become gradually familiar with almost everything with those stars, and even become fanatical fans implicitly. It is the effects of fans that empower entertainment companies to invite those stars to endorse their products, and this win-win strategy not just enhances the recognition of international pop stars but also helps these companies advertise their products. But few media or advertisers will introduce the well-known people in the history in headlines ,let alone invites them to advertise their products, so that the younger generation then overlook them even though they have made way more significant contributions to society than those pop stars.
媒体过度曝光电视、网络、手机上关于这些明星的流行节目，并利用这些节目做广告，是造成这一现象的主要原因。在各种各样的信息轰炸下，尤其是关于明星的八卦，在任何时间、任何地点，年轻人已经逐渐熟悉了明星们的几乎一切，甚至含蓄地成为了狂热的粉丝。正是粉丝的作用使得娱乐公司能够邀请这些明星代言他们的产品，这种双赢的策略不仅提高了国际流行明星的认知度，也帮助这些公司宣传他们的产品。但很少有媒体或广告商会在头条上介绍历史上的名人，更不用说邀请他们为自己的产品做广告了，这样，年轻一代就会忽视他们，即使他们对社会做出了比那些流行歌星更重要的贡献。
In reversing this negative trend, the mass media itself is the most effective and efficient shortcut. In other words, the mass media need to assume the responsibility for bringing historical celebrities into the very focus of young people and for increasing their media exposure. The entertainment industry should commit itself to filming the story of their life or inviting them as its brand spokesman. In this way, the young will realize that it is those celebrities who are the core of the society and that without them the society would not progress so fast.
在扭转这种消极趋势的过程中，大众传媒本身就是最有效和最有效的捷径。换句话说，大众媒体需要承担起责任，把历史名人带入年轻人的视野，增加他们的媒体曝光率。娱乐产业应该致力于拍摄他们的生活故事，或者邀请他们作为自己的品牌代言人。这样，年轻人就会意识到，社会的核心是那些名人，没有他们，社会就不会进步得那么快。
In conclusion, the mass media are the chief culprit behind this trend but what they will do is also the critical factor in changing the current situation.
总之，大众传媒是这一趋势背后的罪魁祸首，但他们所做的也是改变现状的关键因素。
雅思大作文写作7分范文：增加年轻人对本国历史人物兴趣的方法
Many young people today know more about international pop and movie stars than about famous people in the history in their country.Why is this? What can be done to increase young people’s interest in famous people in the history of their country?
今天许多年轻人对国际流行音乐和电影明星的了解比他们国家历史上的名人还要多。这是为什么呢？怎样做才能提高年轻人对本国历史上名人的兴趣？
范文来自网络：
As the globalization of entertainment industry, a great number of foreign celebrities has dashed into our lives, especially for the youth; fascinating super stars is becoming a trend, and even being idolaters has been a lifestyle for many young people. Gradually, more people start to worry about the inheritance of local traditional culture, which is worth considering around the society.
随着娱乐产业的全球化，大量的外国名人闯入了我们的生活，尤其是年轻人；吸引人的超级明星正在成为一种趋势，甚至成为偶像已� 渐渐地，越来越多的人开始担心当地传统文化的传承，这是值得全社会考虑的。
There is no doubt that the contribution made by internet to spread the information of international famous people. Since the easier the access of movies and music from other countries, the more the teenagers would be attracted; influenced by the diverse culture and the amazing and wealthy life of the famous which is reflected by the mass media, children could be obsessed and worship them. Of course, it is undeniably that most of them have the merits and talents, by which the young generation can regard them as the models, being encouraged and getting the motivation in their further development. However, compared with such cultural, tradition and history can be threatened, which is because juveniles have difficulties to focus on learning the complex biography of ancient people who are not familiar and interesting enough for them.
毫无疑问，互联网为传播国际名人的信息做出了贡献。由于电影和音乐从其他国家越容易获得，更多的青少年会被吸引；受大众传媒所反映的多元文化和名人惊人而富有的生活的影响，孩子们会对名人着迷和崇拜。当然，不可否认的是，他们中的大多数人都有优点和才能，年轻一代可以把他们作为榜样，鼓励和得到进一步发展的动力。然而，与这样的文化相比，传统和历史会受到威胁，这是因为青少年很难集中精力学习复杂的古代人们的传记，他们并不熟悉和有趣。
Although young people's attention alters, the importance of historical people cannot be ignored. As a compulsory course in most countries' curriculum, how the history class can capture the interestingness would be the determinant of whether the subject will be successful. Besides, the government also can put the value of these historical people into good use, for example making them as a part of cultural publicity may bring a huge impact as a result, which can input the knowledge to people's mind subconsciously and effectively.
虽然年轻人的注意力发生了变化，但历史人物的重要性不容忽视。历史课作为大多数国家课程的必修课，如何捕捉趣味性将决定这门课能否成功。此外，政府也可以很好地利用这些历史人物的价值，例如，把他们作为文化宣传的一部分可能会带来巨大的影响，这可以把知识输入到人们的潜意识和有效。
In conclusion, the openness of contacting with foreign information should be maintained, while the constitution of our unique culture for teenagers cannot be replaced by any other forms of knowledge.
总之，应该保持接触外国信息的开放性，而我们独特的青少年文化的构成不能被任何其他形式的知识所取代。
雅思小作文真题解析及范文：三个国家从事各个产业人数对比柱状图
题目
The charts below show the distribution of employment in agriculture, industry and services in three countries in 1980 and the projections of distribution in .
下图是1980年三国农业、工业和服务业就业分布情况，以及的分布预测。
范文解析
解析
柱状图描述的是三个国家中从事农业，工业和服务业的人数比例的不同。首先要注意的这个图中应该时态的选择，特别是将来时态的表达方式，同时在描述的时候可以简单的分为三个行业进行描述：农业，工业和服务业。按照5段的结构进行描述比较不会混乱，同时要着重的突出变化的描述，使用相关的衔接词汇进行前后的对比。
高分表达
How many SVO
Land a job
Seeing sth as
Agriculture-oriented
A and B, in both of which SVO.
Be expected to do sth
respectively
The 1980-2020 period
With n. doing (独立主格结构)
Be committed to doing sth
范文
The bar charts compare how many workers were and will be employed in agriculture, industry, and services in three different countries in 1980 and in 2020.
这些柱状图比较了1980年和20三个不同国家的农业、工业和服务业中过去和将来有多少工人。
Seeing agriculture as the focus of economic development,Country B has seen a significant decrease within these four decades .In 1980, as many as around 70% workers were farmers in country B , far higher than that those in country A(just under 20%)and country C(only approximately 10% ) yet this figure will decline to only 40% in 2020 but still higher than that of Country A and Country C, in both of which fewer people will chose developing agriculture as their career.
看到农业作为经济发展的重点，B国已经明显降低在这些四十年。1980年，多达70%的工人都是农民在B国，远高于那些在国家(不到20%)和C(只有大约10%)然而，在2020年，这个数字将下降到只有40%,但仍高于国家和国家C,在这两个更少的人会选择发展农业作为自己的职业。
In Country A and Country B, the 1980-2020 period however saw an 20% growth in service industry from around 20% and 40% to almost 40% and 60% respectively, with more people working in services in Country C than in Country A. By contrast, 40% or so workers did and will land a job in service industry in both years.
在A和B国的国家，然而看到了1980 - 2020年期间增长20%在服务业几乎从20%和40%分别为40%和60%,与更多的人工作在服务国家C比A .相比之下，40%左右的工人做的，将在两年内找到工作在服务行业。
Industry is expected to be less important in 2020 than in 1980 in all three countries as the figures all decreased slightly. But it is noticeable that more workers are employed in this field in Country A and B ( roughly over30% )than in Country A and country C( less than 15%).
由于上述三个国家的工业数据均略有下降，预计2020年工业的重要性将低于1980年。但值得注意的是，A国和B国在这一领域雇用的工人(大约超过30%)比A国和C国(不到15%)多。
Overall, it is estimated that Country B will still be agriculture-oriented while Country C will be committed to enhancing services in 2020.
总体而言，预计B国仍将以农业为主，而C国将致力于在2020年加强服务。
雅思大作文真题范文
We sure live differently from our parents did decades ago. The changes are wide and profound. At the same time, we are facing challenges and problems unknown in the past. Could we find solutions to problems created by scientific development? The answer seems to be no.
Some of the most obvious problems caused by technological advances lie in the IT industry. At a time when we did not have computers and electronic bank services, people took money with them and paid by cash. If they were stolen, only the amount they had with them was lost. But now credit cards are more commonly used in shopping malls and other places, crimes again us have become more serious and caused greater losses to people. A thief may tape the code of your credit card and make a copy of it. Then he could safely withdraw all your money from an ATM machine. Crimes such as this are very sticky to solve because there is no witness and the surveillance cameras give little help to the police.
Another example is the issue of information control with the media industry including TV networks and Internet that give easy access to information without discrimination to people’s age. This has created a huge problem for parents and schools because teenage people are particularly vulnerable to adult materials and information violent in nature. In the past, when most information came in the form of print, it was relatively easy to control what children read. When a parent put away a book unsuitable for children, they were cut off from the source of information. With computer parents could use software to filter bad web sites but could not prevent new ones from appearing every day.
People are working very hard to solve such problems that come along with advances in science and technology, but the efforts are not sufficient and not very successful. Even with the little progress we have achieved, we find ourselves defeated by new problems with greater complexity and in wider scope.
In conclusion, developments in many fields of our life have brought us both benefits and problems. Developments in the banking industry give us greater convenience but making us targets of computer-based theft. Changes in media industry expose young people to inappropriate information difficult for parent’s control. However up until now, we have not successfully found permanent solutions yet.
7月28日雅思写作真题：Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later, and it is often argued that these are the best people to talk to teenagers about the dangers of committing a crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree?改过自新重回社会的犯人是教育青少年关于犯罪的危害性的最佳人员。你同意与否？
今天的考题是8月8日的原题重现。看下当时的题目：Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later. Some people think that they are the best people to talk to school students about the danger of committing a crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree?可见几乎一样。顺便提醒，雅思使用旧题，不管哪一科，一般是使用5-2年前的旧题，对于现在来说，就是使用到的题目。
7分雅思范文示例：
One important part of teenagers’ education is turning them into law-abiding citizens by making them realise the dangers of committing crimes. The best way to do this, as many people would argue, is to have ex-prisoners, who have now become good citizens, talking to teenagers about their personal stories. While I think it may indeed be effective, it may also fail sometimes.
Obviously, ex-prisoners are in a better position than anybody else to let teenagers understand the consequences of violating the law. They were personally involved in crimes and know very well how much pain their behavior has inflicted upon the victims and their families. They also know very well how hard their life in prison was and what freedom really means. Compared with the lectures given by the law teachers, the personal stories shared by ex-prisoners are more direct, more powerful emotionally, and thus more effective as an educational tool.
Nevertheless, having a former prisoner standing face to face with a group of teenagers may be an awkward scenario in some cases. It is common for people, especially youngsters, to have a fear towards criminals, particularly those who have committed violent crimes. Very naturally, teenagers may develop a strong distrust of the former criminals and so they will not listen to their stories, however interesting these stories might be. That is why many schools would have policemen, instead of former prisoners, giving law lessons to their students, because to teenagers, policemen are much more trustworthy.
In conclusion, teenagers’ ability to tell right from wrong is important to themselves as well as the entire society. By listening to the personal stories of former prisoners, youngsters may be touched and become more conscious of the consequences of committing crimes, yet alternative measures should be found when this does not work out.
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参考译文
青少年教育的一个重要部分是让他们认识到犯罪的危险， 在许多人看来，最好的方法就是让现在已� 虽然我认为它可能确实有效，但有时候也可能没有作用。
显然，前囚犯比任何人都更能让青少年了解违法的后果。他们亲身参与了犯罪，非常清楚他们的行为给受害者及其家人带来的痛苦。他们也非常清楚他们在监狱里的生活有多艰难，自由到底意味着什么。与法律老师的讲课相比，前囚犯分享的个人故事更直接，情感上更有力度，因此是更有效的教育工具。
然而，在某些情况下，让一名前囚犯与一群青少年面对面可能是一种尴尬的情景。人们，特别是年轻人，对罪犯(特别是那些曾犯下暴力罪行的罪犯)感到恐惧是很常见的。很自然，青少年可能会对以前的罪犯产生强烈的不信任，所以他们不会听他们讲故事，无论这些故事多么有趣。这就是为什么许多学校会请警察，而不是以前的囚犯，来给他们的学生上法律课，因为对青少年来说，警察要值得信赖得多。
总之，青少年辨别是非的能力对他们自己和整个社会都很重要。通过听前囚犯的个人故事，青少年可能会被感动，从而更多地意识到犯罪的后果，但是，当这种做法行不通时，就应该找到其他的措施。
本雅思范文中的高分句子
1. One important part of teenagers’ education is turning them into law-abiding citizens by making them realise the dangers of committing crimes.
青少年教育的一个重要部分是让他们认识到犯罪的危险，
2. Compared with the lectures given by the law teachers, the personal stories shared by ex-prisoners are more direct, more powerful emotionally, and thus more effective as an educational tool.
与法律老师的讲课相比，前囚犯分享的个人故事更直接，情感上更有力度，因此是更有效的教育工具。
3. Very naturally, teenagers may develop a strong distrust of the former criminals and so they will not listen to their stories, however interesting these stories might be.
很自然，青少年可能会对以前的罪犯产生强烈的不信任，所以他们不会听他们讲故事，无论这些故事多么有趣。
4. By listening to the personal stories of former prisoners, youngsters may be touched and become more conscious of the consequences of committing crimes, yet alternative measures should be found when this does not work out.
通过听前囚犯的个人故事，青少年可能会被感动，从而更多地意识到犯罪的后果，但是，当这种做法行不通时，就应该找到其他的措施。
雅思写作范文分享-同意与否题型
7月28号雅思写作真题话题：Some people who have been in prison become citizens later. Some people think that they are the best people to talk to school students about the danger of committing a crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree?已� 这个词也算是该话题的题眼。
承认former prisoner的优势：
自己经历有说服力
不觉得former prisoner好：
家长也可以教育孩子啊，孩子不会觉得害怕
警察也可以，了解法律的细节更多
所以，立场也就有了，肯定它的一部分作用，
参考雅思范文：
Some people believe that people who used to be prisoners are the best people who can persuade students to comply with laws. However, I cannot agree with this opinion.
Admittedly, rehabilitated offenders can share their experience in prison with students. For people who committed crimes impulsively, most of them feel regretful for their behavior, and from their stories, students can learn the consequences of committing crimes. For example, criminal records will make it difficult for people to reintegrate into the society. Nevertheless, there are better roles who can educate students on the topic of crime more effectively.
To begin with, parents may have a deeper impact on students. After all, not all people have a positive image of ex-prisoners, and some students are even afraid of them. However, parents have a more intimate relationship with their children, and most children will listen to what their parents say. Therefore, letting rehabilitated prisoners give speeches may make students frightened, while parents can educate their children in a more acceptable way.
In addition, inviting policemen is also an optimal choice. Compared to former prisoners, policemen are more familiar with laws, and they can tell students some details about laws. For example, students can realize that friendship is no more important than laws, and helping friends sell drugs also violates the law. Then, students can have a better understanding for obeying laws, including what they can do and what they should not do.
To sum up, parents and the police are better choices for educating students about the consequences of committing crimes, considering that parents are close to their children, and the police know details of laws.
可见雅思写作的三段式框架：导入结尾各位一段，短小精悍，中部是主体部分，真材实料。
7月28日雅思写作范文分享
Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later. Some people think that they are the best people to talk to school students about the danger of committing a crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
属于犯罪类话题；具体涉及到预防青少年犯罪的层面。考生在答题时需要注意题干中限定词 “the best”。若采取不同意的态度，则可以先承认其合理之处，但是有其他合适的人选。在写作过程中，犯罪类词汇表达也可能是考生存在的一个难点，因此平时务必注重该类话题词汇的积累。
P1：改写背景信息且表明自己的态度。
P2：论述成为好公民的罪犯可以告知学生犯罪的危害但他们不是最佳人选。
P3：论述其他可以教育学生犯罪的危害的人选。
P4：总结并表明自己的观点
雅思写作范文：
Those rehabilitated ex-convicts are the best persons who could educate students on the severe consequence of perpetrating a crime, as some people argue. As far as I am concerned, I disagree with this viewpoint.
Admittedly, the former prisoners’ painful experience does serve the purpose well. The depression of being sentenced and punished as well as the torment of being isolated from society act as a deterrent to prevent teenagers from engaging in criminal wrongdoing, whereas those people are not the most suitable ones considering the fact that their stories are merely relevant to their personal sufferings rather than a comprehensive law education.
In this scenario, officials of law enforcement department and judge of the court are supposed to assist students in building up the awareness of abiding by the laws. Lawyers, for instance, are far more knowledgeable about the line between legal and illegal, imparting the common law concept to juveniles so as to stop them breaking laws due to ignorance. As for the judges, who are equipped with expertise in trial and arbitration, can emphasize the coercive power of law and the principle of equality under the law in order to eliminate adolescents’ idea of getting off. Therefore, it is indispensable to have both of them for school legal education.
In conclusion, even if the stories told by ex-prisoners have a deterrent impact on children who are curious about committing offences, I object to inviting them to educate students in school. From my perspective, experts dealing with law cases and sentences play a more significant role in helping children realize the danger of crimes.
雅思写作犯罪类词汇：
rehabilitated恢复的；复原的 convict 囚犯 perpetrate a crime犯罪 be sentenced 被判决
torment折磨(精神) act as a deterrent 作为一个威慑物 criminal wrongdoing犯罪行为
in this scenario 在这种情况下 law enforcement department执法部门 abide by遵守
the line between legal and illegal合法与非法的界限 ignorance无知 expertise in专长于
trial审判 arbitration仲裁 the coercive power of law法律的强制性
the principle of equality under the law法律的公平性 get off逃脱(刑罚)
have a deterrent impact on对。。。有威慑作用 …, as some people argue 非限定定语从句
..., imparting …现在分词作结果状语 considering the fact that,…原因状语从句引导词