2023出国留学申请书（通用25篇）
Growing up in a modest village in China, I hardly ever had the chance to see many examples of modern technology; people who dig wells by hand to obtain drinking wateruse ox-driven plows to cultivate their fields don’t have much use for televisiopersonal computers. But when my father gave me an old radio to play with, I wanted nothing more than to take apart the contraptionsee what i ide made such interesting sounds. Sitting on the floor with a confused grin, surrounded by wiresmetal, I looked up at my fatheraskedthe noises were…(有删节)
合理地阐述了申请者学习电子工程的动机，学习动机是评审委员非常看中的。同时，读了这段文字，会使读者沉浸在对童年往事的美好回忆里，借此打动评审委员的心。
另外一篇修改过的文章开头用诗一般的语言写道(有删节):
……I first read this paragraphMadame Curie as a 14-year-old child,I still remember how wonderful I felt. I remember thinking, “What esteemed men they were! How hard they worked!” As I grew older, this paragraph became a source of encouragement in the face of adversity. I begin to feel a magical blue light twinkling in my heart, kindling a love of science,encouraging me to charge bravely into the unknown world.
结尾呼应了开头，阐述了作者为什么要去美国读书:
I never forgot my adolescent idol, Maria Curie. As I re-read the book, another pa age leaped out: “She was now 24-an age when some of her great contemporaries were to be on the brink of major discoveries… Maria took the trainWarsaw to Paris, the intellectual Mecca.”
Monsieur le Président，
Dans le souhait d'une inscription auprès de votre université， j'ai l'honneurde vous exposer ci-dessous mes principales motivations.
J'étudie le fran?ais depuis bient?t quatre ans， et j'obtiendrai malicence(bac+4) en juillet 20_ .
Outre la langue fran?aise， j'ai étudié littérature fran?aise à laquelle jem'intéresse particulièrement.
Après l'obtention de mon dipl?me， j'aimerais poursuivre mes études delittérature fran?aise dans votre université réputée pour son enseignement delittérature.
Or， pour entreprendre les démarches nécessaires， j'ai besoin d’un certificatde pré-inscription délivré par votre université. C'est pourquoi je vous demandequelles conditions je dois remplir pour obtenir ce certificat et quelles sontles attesations que je devrais fournir.
Si c'est possible， pourriez-vous me faire parvenir， à l'adresse ci-dessus， undossier d'inscription ?
Vous remerciant par avance de votre bienveillance， je vous prie d'agréer，Monsieur le Président， l'expression de mon profond respect.
本人__x，男，1986年生于______,从小就受到良好的家庭教育，而且在父母的言传身教下我很早就树立了自己正确的人生观和价值观，并懂得了如何在生活中磨炼自己。
____年x月我被________x录取，并选择了适合自己学习的`国际经济与贸易专业。
一直以来我学习刻苦，勤于钻研，在四年内，学院给了我得智体美全面的教育，科学的安排了;国际贸易、国际工商管理、财务会计、国际结算、市场营销等课程。
四年期间修完全部课程并顺利地通过了计算机国家二级、英语四级等等级考试。适应社会和公司对人才的要求。
为了锻炼自己、服务大家，在大学期间我积极地加入了学院大队学生会，并担任班长一职。在担任班长期间，由于我的积极工作、努力学习，为队里做出了一定的贡献，取得了一定的成绩，曾分别在五四评优和学期评优中被评为“优秀学员”。此外我独立完成了学院科研项目《______》，并获得专家教授的一致好评。
大一、大二暑假期间为了培养自己的能力，了解社会。曾在《__x》杂志社从事撰稿工作，得到了编辑部的一致好评。
后在世纪文学，幻剑书盟等站驻站写文，其中《____》一文获得了近3万次的点击量。
身为军校地方生的我性格开朗，勤奋好学，乐观、自信、责任心强;接受能力强，有强烈的集体荣誉感和上进心。乐于与人相处，与身边的人相处融洽，具有团体合作精神;为人正直，工作认真负责，能吃苦耐劳，做事严谨;缺点是性格比较浮躁。
Dear _,
I am a student of _ school _ (female, born on August 20th, _), and I amabout to become a middle school student. My biggest wish is to be able to studyin _, because destiny made me know _middle school. In the summer of 20_ I wasfortunate to become a member of the school club, and represented _ middle schoolto participate _ in _ the middle school student sports meeting (table tenniscompetition) that year, and achieved good results. In just a few days of thecompetition, through the introduction of the leading teachers and teammates, Ihave a full understanding of _middle school. After that, I pay more attention tolearning and love sports. In my heart, learning and exercise have constitutedthe driving force for mutual promotion. At present, my table tennis skills havebeen further improved. In the 20_20_years, I have won the second place in thewomen's group A of the table tennis competition for two consecutive years.
Ping-pong is my hobby, and it is my goal of continuous efforts to improveacademic performance. A good learning environment can create outstandinglearning talents. The suburban high school is my dream choice. The school hasthe traditional virtues of solidarity and mutual assistance, and has a learningatmosphere of "comparison, learning, catching up, and surpassing", and it ismore problem-solving. Good teachers and leaders who are difficult and willing toteach. Opportunities are met but not sought. If the school leaders give me thisopportunity, I will continue to sum up my experience and lessons, be mentallyprepared to dare to endure all hardships, establish the confidence to overcomeall difficulties, and strive to be excellent Achievement completed three yearsof junior high school life. Never let the school leaders down. I don'tunderstand whether this formulation is appropriate, but I implore the leaders tostudy my application.
Yours sincerely,
___,___
尊敬的考官：
您好!
很荣幸有机会向您呈上我的留学申请书。
我出生于一个教师之家，母亲是一位优秀的小学教师;父亲是也曾经是教师，后来经历了人生的第二次选择，考入法院，成了一名法官。父母对生活的热情和对人生挫折的态度，潜移默化地影响着我，形成了我自强不息、不轻言败的性格。
中考的教训，让我懂得了什么叫脚踏实地，什么叫不图虚荣，什么叫谦虚谨慎，什么叫取长补短……高中三年，我努力夯实学科基础知识、掌握学习方法、提高操作实践能力、同时，利用课余时间广泛地涉猎大量书籍，不但充实了自己，而且培养了自己多方面的技能。夷陵中学严谨的学风塑造了我朴实、稳重的学习态度，更重要的是在这样一个精英云集的地方，我学会了在竞争中挑战自我，在合作中欣赏他人。这样一步一个脚印走来，我尝到了成功的喜悦：成绩逐年上升，我看到了自己身上蕴藏着的无限潜能，它让我相信——如果给我一个支点，我也能撬起整个地球!
选择_大学我有以下几个理由：
一是_大学是一所国家教育部直属的，拥有研究生院，本科专业涵盖了理、工、文、经、管、法、教育等学科门类的综合性重点大学，是一所有着坚实的学术基础和严谨的治学传统，校园环境优美的大学。在这样的学习环境里，无论是在知识能力，还是在个人素质修养方面，我会受益匪浅。
二是_大学是一所以工为主的大学，这符合了我的学科兴趣，我是一个理科生，尤其以数学、物理学科见长，这次推荐我参加自主招生的就是我的数学老师和物理老师。我喜欢在这样自主开放的环境里学习，希望可以有更为广阔的发展前景。
三是_大学坚持以“厚基础，宽口径，强能力，高素质”的人才培养计划，在教学中注重创新能力培养，注重提高学生的综合素质，学校实施了一系列教学改革新措施包括：名师上讲台工程、中英文双语教学工程、“创新人才培养”工程、本硕连读制度等，还有一系列的完善学分制管理的制度，包括主辅修制、弹性学制、第二学位制、优异生培养制度等。
现在有很多的大学生毕业后面临就业难的问题，这也将是我今后不能回避的，但我想，这是一个适应社会的问题。大学是一个可以接触并尝试众多领域的独一无二的场所，是一个沟通社会的平台。我希望这里掌握生活技能，培养自己的社会角色，使自己能承担社会责任，权利和义务，成为一个真正的社会人。
此致
敬礼!
申请人：
__年__月__日
尊敬的考官：
您好!
很荣幸有机会向您呈上我的留学申请书。
我出生于一个教师之家，母亲是一位优秀的小学教师;父亲是也曾经是教师，后来经历了人生的第二次选择，考入法院，成了一名法官。父母对生活的热情和对人生挫折的态度，潜移默化地影响着我，形成了我自强不息、不轻言败的性格。
中考的教训，让我懂得了什么叫脚踏实地，什么叫不图虚荣，什么叫谦虚谨慎，什么叫取长补短……高中三年，我努力夯实学科基础知识、掌握学习方法、提高操作实践能力、同时，利用课余时间广泛地涉猎大量书籍，不但充实了自己，而且培养了自己多方面的技能。夷陵中学严谨的学风塑造了我朴实、稳重的学习态度，更重要的是在这样一个精英云集的地方，我学会了在竞争中挑战自我，在合作中欣赏他人。这样一步一个脚印走来，我尝到了成功的喜悦：成绩逐年上升，我看到了自己身上蕴藏着的无限潜能，它让我相信——如果给我一个支点，我也能撬起整个地球!
选择_大学我有以下几个理由：
一是_大学是一所国家教育部直属的，拥有研究生院，本科专业涵盖了理、工、文、经、管、法、教育等学科门类的综合性重点大学，是一所有着坚实的学术基础和严谨的治学传统，校园环境优美的大学。在这样的学习环境里，无论是在知识能力，还是在个人素质修养方面，我会受益匪浅。
二是_大学是一所以工为主的大学，这符合了我的学科兴趣，我是一个理科生，尤其以数学、物理学科见长，这次推荐我参加自主招生的就是我的数学老师和物理老师。我喜欢在这样自主开放的环境里学习，希望可以有更为广阔的发展前景。
三是_大学坚持以“厚基础，宽口径，强能力，高素质”的人才培养计划，在教学中注重创新能力培养，注重提高学生的综合素质，学校实施了一系列教学改革新措施包括：名师上讲台工程、中英文双语教学工程、“创新人才培养”工程、本硕连读制度等，还有一系列的完善学分制管理的制度，包括主辅修制、弹性学制、第二学位制、优异生培养制度等。
现在有很多的大学生毕业后面临就业难的问题，这也将是我今后不能回避的，但我想，这是一个适应社会的问题。大学是一个可以接触并尝试众多领域的独一无二的场所，是一个沟通社会的平台。我希望这里掌握生活技能，培养自己的社会角色，使自己能承担社会责任，权利和义务，成为一个真正的社会人。
现在的科技发展可谓日新月异，我的学习是要掌握最基本的学习工具和方法，将来利用这些工具和方法，再去学习新的东西。我们不可能靠在大学里学到的知识来维护一生的，以后如果不再学了，照样会落后，所以，本科读什么专业不能完全决定毕业后的工作方向。我希望根据我的学科特长，选择适合我的专业，但是我不会太在意专业的趋向，绝对服从学校根据我的情况进行专业调剂。
此致
敬礼!
申请人：
__年__月__日
尊敬的X大学老师领导：
您好!首先感谢您能在百忙之中抽出时间审视我的申请材料!
我是X市高级中学理科实验班的X，和其他的同胞或者说是竞争者们一样，我也但愿通过贵校的自主招生来实现我一直以来的梦想考入X大学。
在众多高校中，唯有X大学深深吸引了我，而且我也听到X的学长说，X非常适合那些“有想法主意”的人，只要你有想法主意，X都会尽全力帮你实现，我觉得我就是那种有想法主意、有立异意识的人，这也使我更加坚定了“将来一定要到X读书”的决心。凭借着十几年如一日的努力，我的成绩一直名列前茅，中考更是以全市第二十八的成绩考入铁岭市重点高中理科实验班。到了高中，我并没有骄傲，而是更加努力的学习，成绩也有了进一步的奔腾，每次考试成绩均不乱在年级前十名，施展好时还会进入前五名，我坚信自己是有资格进入X大学的。
相信在此之前，您已经阅读过了无数的自荐信，对省、市三好学生，校学生会主席，团支部书记等也已经见怪不怪了。很可惜，这些刺眼的荣誉和职位我都没有，我有的是对X全面的了解，有的是对X始终如一的热爱与向往，有的是“非X不去”的勇气与决心。更重要的是，我有着老实、量力而行的品质，我不会为了得到您的青睐而强调事实，虚张声势，而且我觉得一个人的领导能力、组织能力、交际能力和协调能力并不是只有靠这些职位才能体现出来的，究竟校学生会主席只有一个，但具有多地方能力的高中生远不止这些。
做事坚决，善于筹划是我的另一长处。说到筹划，我对自己的未来也已经做好了初步的打算：近年来，跟着中国经济的起飞，汽车已经走入了平常庶民家。因为汽车产业的提高，这地方精英的需求量也在随之增长。这对从小酷爱汽车，7岁就能识别数十种车标的我，无疑是一种巨大的激励，我也励志将来要进入一家汽车企业，介入设计制造一部机能优异，而且安全节能的汽车。据我所知，现今中国汽车在发念头的节油耐用，不乱机能上仍有一定的进步空间，而伴跟着油价的提高，增压直喷等技术也已走下神坛，进入乘用领域。在车身结构地方，人们对于安全恬静的追求是无止境的，所以有了碰撞吸能设计，有了更优秀的悬架，有了铝材，甚至碳纤维的应用。我愿把我全部的精力都投入到这些领域中，让中国的汽车有朝一日也能展示在世界的大舞台上。这一切看似虚幻的梦想，一旦进入X，就都很有可能变为现实。
此致
敬礼!
申请人：
__年__月__日
尊敬的先生/女士：
我非常荣幸的为某某某同学出具这份正式的推荐信。我是x交通大学土木建筑学院的副教授，毕业于上海同济大学并获得博士学位，目前在x交通大学土木建筑学院教授道路工程专业课程。某某某同学参加我教授的道路工程专业的学习已经将近两年了，所以我对该同学还是相当了解的。最近得知，某某某同学准备出国留学深造，并希望我能为他写一封推荐信，我感到非常高兴和欣慰。作为一名我最优秀的学生之一，某某某应该受到更好的教育和更专业的指导。因此，我很荣幸的向贵校推荐该同学。
某某某同学是我校土木建筑学院20x级道路工程专业的一名学生，在其读大三后，我一直教授某某某同学道路工程专业知识。在我教授专业知识期间，他以他的刻苦好学以及强大的求知欲给我留下了深刻的印象。每次上课他都会有很多问题提出，而且不全部释疑决不罢休。他勤于预习复习，并且对于一些较难的知识点，他总是认真记录笔记并和我一起讨论。在学业后期的课程设计中，他总是对自己设计的方案进行反思，并积极向我请教，然后回去进行调整，然后在反思。总之，某某某同学在做设计时追求每一个细节的尽善尽美。在我看来，他是一名十分有上进心的同学。所以我很希望某某某同学能够继续他的学业，受到更高学术成就老师的指导。
鉴于某某某的同学、我的同事以及我本人对某某某都有很高的评价，我真诚的向贵校推荐他，希望他能够入选贵校的学习项目。如果您对于某某某本人的情况以及这封推荐信有任何译文，欢迎您按照下方所提供的联系方式联系我。
此致
敬礼!
申请人：
__年__月__日
pplied Program：Organizational Behavior
I am interested in the field of study of Organizational Behavior. In thepast， I have had the experience of working in settings where the people and thecorporate cultures of the companies were all different. I have found that thereis a great difference in the both the behaviors of people and of theirorganizations， depending on whether they are state-owned enterprises (SOEs)，large multinational firms， or small to medium sized foreign enterprises. Onesimple example is that of the ability of an employee to act independentlywithout direct instructions from his or her boss. In many Chinese organizations，acting without direct instructions is considered a form of disrespect towardsthe supervisor， who is generally offended by such behavior. In my experience andresearch， such organizations tend to have low operating efficiency with theemployees losing their innate ability to take the initiative.
In contrast， foreign enterprises tend to welcome employees who have theability to make decisions on their own， though the extent to which this is truedepends on whether the supervisor is a local Chinese or an expatriate. Theseorganizat Applied Program：Organizational Behavior
The purpose behind this personal statement is to not only gain admission toyour well-established and highly respected Ph.D. program， but to impress uponyou my passion for learning and my tremendous desire to succeed in bothscholastic research and in teaching on the professional level. I have based mydecision to pursue an academic career not on purely practical reasons， butrather on my own natural interests and aptitude. My personal philosophy is thatmoney and social status should not be pursued as life-consuming objectives andthat in actuality they are the by-products of goals originating from one's innerneeds. I understand that my intellectual capacity is a gift， and I intend to usethis gift to the very best of my substantial capabilities.
Respectful Sir or Madam，
I‘m writing to you to apply for a scholarship of your school. I’m very gladto hear you can provide scholarship for exchange students. That‘s really goodnews for me. And I am very appreciating that you can give me a chance to explainway I want to apply for a scholarship. My name is Haoyu Liu. I’m 17 years oldand I‘m a fresh man in Taiyuan No.2 Foreign Language High School. I’m very proudof as one of my school. I‘m diligent and I know I must be a useful person. So Ialways tell myself that I have to learn more and more. I’m also very outgoingand I like to help people as possible as I can. That‘s way I got many friends. Iwas born in Jixian， a small county with poor land and terrible weather. Myparents were farming at home. Even life doesn’t easy， I still hopeful enough. Istill love my hometown and I want to do something for my country. So I want tolearn more knowledge as possible as I can. I know how hard people‘s life. So Iwant to change it by myself. That’s way I‘m diligent and I like to help people.But when I went to high school， our life got worst. My parents can’t afford mytuition. So my father went to Taiyuan to find a job. And we have to rent alittle house near by my school because my school is far from my hometown. But Istill keep my faith， because I know that my family will support me to let mydream come true forever. When I got the information that I can be an exchangestudent， I was exciting but confusing. I really want to go to German to studybut I don‘t want my parents worry about my tuition. So I’m writing this letterto you to apply for a scholarship of your school. I wish I can do better justbecause I have a dream that I can change my family， my hometown even my country.I hope I can share responsibility for my parents from this thing. At school， I‘ma good student. I’m interested about sports， arts and science. I also like tostudy foreign language. That‘s way I chose to study German and English atschool. I noticed that language can let me communicate with others easily. But Ican’t only study language. I have to know about the Germanic culture clearly.That‘s way I need to be an exchange student this time. But I need your trust. Ineed a scholarship of your school， because I’m a good student. I have a dream.In that dream， I can see my parents are smiling because I became a usefulperson. I can see my teachers are smiling when I came back from German. My willis strong. And I know I can do better when I go to German. So I‘m writing to youto apply a scholarship. And I’m waiting for your return. Thank you for your kindheart and reading my letter.
Best wishes.
Letters of recommendation are a very important part of the applicationprocess. As colleges become more and more sought out from the increasing numberof applicants each year, the need to stand out from the competition is alsoincreasing. Below we will provide helpful information on how to write a collegerecommendation as well as advice for tailoring each letter.
A high school transcript can help tell an admissions office a lot about acandidate, but a college recommendation letter provides an opportunity for themto see the whole person. While recommendation letters are never a bad idea toinclude in the application, even if the college does not require one, manycolleges do necessitate the inclusion of one. Here is some advice to keep inmind when writing a college recommendation letter:
Know the candidate - it may sound obvious, but it is important that youknow the candidate well. After all, how can you write a college recommendationletter for a someone you know little about? Recommendations written forcandidates with a vague familiarity are often identifiable and can do more harmthan good.
How you know the candidate - when you write a college recommendationletter, make sure to include how you know the candidate as well as the length oftime you have known that person.
Provide relevant information - be sure to find out the purpose of therecommendation so as to provide relevant information about the candidate and hisor her specific qualifications. If the recommendation is to supplement anapplication, discuss how that person is an appropriate candidate for the collegehe or she is applying to. Despite its purpose, however, the overall goal of acollege recommendation letter is to attest to the capabilities and character ofthe candidate.
Obtain a rsum - another tip on how to write a collage recommendation letteris to first obtain the student's rsum with a listing of his or her GPA,activities, awards, leadership roles, community service, employment experienceand special skills. The more information you have about a particular candidate,the more constructive your recommendation can be.
Personalize the letter - to help make the letter more personal, beforewriting a college recommendation letter, it is important to determine the personto whom the letter should be addressed. If the student is unaware of the name,the letter may begin "Dear Selection Committee."
Proofread the letter - one of the most important tips on how to write acollege recommendation letter is making sure to proofread it when finished. Aletter containing grammatical errors will appear unprofessional and may leave anegative impression.
Mailing the letter - establish with the student whether the recommendationletter must be mailed in an official envelope from your institution, or if itcan be included with the application. If it is to accompany the application,return the letter to the candidate in a sealed envelope.
Determine the deadline - double-check with the student as to the deadlineof the college recommendation letter. Ideally, you will be given an adequateamount of time to complete a positive, detailed letter, however, the mostimportant detail is that it is received before the application deadline.
Save the letter - when you have finished writing a recommendation, be sureto save it in order to help make writing the next college recommendation lettereasier. The student will likely be applying to more than one school and may askthat you write a separate recommendation for each one. Although it is importantthat each letter is tailored to the application at hand, select information canbe recycled for multiple letters. It is more convenient to tailor the originalpassage than to repetitively recollect the advice on how to write a collegerecommendation.
What Colleges Really Want
Colleges place a large emphasis on a student's academic ability becausewhat is accomplished in high school is the strongest predictor of their academicsuccess in college. What colleges really want, however, is a win-win situation.They want to admit students who will thrive at their institution, not only forthe student's benefit, but for their own as well. As more and more studentsbecome college-bound, colleges and universities will become increasinglyselective, placing more emphasis on the ability to know how to write a collegerecommendation letter.
As a teacher, counselor, employer or personal acquaintance of acollege-bound teen, you may at some point receive a request for help in writinga college recommendation letter. These students are not only placing their trustin you, they are putting you in the unique position to make an impact on whetheror not they are admitted to their college of choice. Following this advice onhow to write a college recommendation will help to ensure a professional letterand give your candidate a greater likelihood of being accepted into his or hercollege of choice.
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Letters veryimportant part applicationprocess. collegesbecome moremoresought out from increasingnumber applicantseach year, standout fromalsoincreasing. Below we providehelpful information collegerecommendationtailoringeach letter. Know maysound obvious, youknow candidatewell. After all,how can you write collegerecommendation letter someoneyou know little about?Recommendations written vaguefamiliarity oftenidentifiable cando more harm thangood. Obtain anothertip collagerecommendation letter firstobtain student'srsumherGPA, activities, awards, leadership roles, community service, employmentexperience specialskills. moreinformation you have about particularcandidate,moreconstructive your recommendation can
Due to the comprehensiveness of China’s “reform and open” policies,economics plays an increasingly important role in the development of its globalposition. Though more and more companies built, management of companies cannotcatch up with the development of the companies. Management is a burgeoning fieldin China, so I hope I can acquire more modern knowledge on management inEngland.
The roots of my strong interest in business can be traced back to mychildhood. My father was among the first of China’s new breed of modernentrepreneurs. As a young girl, it was inspirational hearing about his businessventures, and meeting the varied and interesting circle of entrepreneurs. Mymother was also involved in business as an accountant, helping him with simplecalculations. And so it was early in my life that I hoped I, also, would somedaybe able to enter the realm of business.
With the time of growing up, I preferred reading books to satisfy mycuriosity. I never ceased to contemplate over the questions I encountered.Subjects on business and management became a special fascination to me and myknowledge of psychology as well as interest in this field was increasingrapidly.
As a high school student in China, I had to concentrate on the CollegeEntrance Examination (CEE), even so, books not related to the exams were neverexcluded from my life. Unfortunately when sitting in the exam in June, 20__, Iwas so nervous that I didn’t score well in the CEE exam. I enrolled in thedepartment of Computer Science in Zhejiang College of Traditional ChineseMedicine. Any attempt to persuade myself to focus on my major turned out to be afailure at the beginning of my college life. After several terms, I realizedthat I would never be interested in being a programmer or an engineer. At thatmoment, I lost my direction and objectives.
My persistence in reading saved me from the dark situation. As a matter offact, I enjoyed reading the books included Encyclopedia American, and some booksabout management by Peter F.Drucker. I began to notice something interesting:Why some companies can produce more than others? Why some company can sell morethan others? Why some companies can build up but others cannot when facing thesame difficulties?
With the questions in my mind, I started to read many relevant books. I waslucky to read the book “Jack: Straight from the Gut”by Jack Welch, in Which JohnA. Byrne makes a clear illustration that the management is important for acompany. When I was a junior, I ran a bookshop by myself near my school. Ishould manage not only the finance in the shop but also the employees in my shopeven made some strategies to enlarge the business in my shop to hold on the runthe shop. From this, my interpersonal skills and the capacity in business hasbeen greatly developed, definitely I was increasingly interested in what I wasdoing. By December, 20__, I had finally determined to take business managementas my career instead of IT. To accumulate more relevant knowledge, I strived togain more practical work experience in some big companies.
Fortunately, as a senior, I began by conducting an internship in theArchitecture Company in Zhejiang Province. Over six months, I worked as anassistant of the manager to harmonize the relationship between the differentdepartments in this company and to draft some management system, which broadenedmy perspective of management conditions and business performance in differentindustries. The experience showed me that management is much more important thanthat of I thought in big companies. After graduation, I continued my work inthis company. In May, 20__, the company offered me an opportunity to participatein an training program held by a famous management school. Through in-depthdiscussions with teachers and students in the classes, they all encouraged me topursue my future career in management field because of my intellectual abilityand the brand new ideas I mentioned.
During the short period of training, I realized that pursuing a higherdegree in management is a wise choice for me now. Lancaster, with its excellencein management, represents the perfect fit for my needs. In your challengingenvironment, I can build the required foundation of knowledge related tomanagement to achieve my goals. I am firmly convinced that your admission willbe my first step of success. With this in mind, I hereby submit my application,and await your favorable reply.
Letters of recommendation are a very important part of the applicationprocess. As colleges become more and more sought out from the increasing numberof applicants each year, the need to stand out from the competition is alsoincreasing. Below we will provide helpful information on how to write a collegerecommendation as well as advice for tailoring each letter.
A high school transcript can help tell an admissions office a lot about acandidate, but a college recommendation letter provides an opportunity for themto see the whole person. While recommendation letters are never a bad idea toinclude in the application, even if the college does not require one, manycolleges do necessitate the inclusion of one. Here is some advice to keep inmind when writing a college recommendation letter:
Know the candidate - it may sound obvious, but it is important that youknow the candidate well. After all, how can you write a college recommendationletter for a someone you know little about? Recommendations written forcandidates with a vague familiarity are often identifiable and can do more harmthan good.
How you know the candidate - when you write a college recommendationletter, make sure to include how you know the candidate as well as the length oftime you have known that person.
Provide relevant information - be sure to find out the purpose of therecommendation so as to provide relevant information about the candidate and hisor her specific qualifications. If the recommendation is to supplement anapplication, discuss how that person is an appropriate candidate for the collegehe or she is applying to. Despite its purpose, however, the overall goal of acollege recommendation letter is to attest to the capabilities and character ofthe candidate.
Obtain a rsum - another tip on how to write a collage recommendation letteris to first obtain the student's rsum with a listing of his or her GPA,activities, awards, leadership roles, community service, employment experienceand special skills. The more information you have about a particular candidate,the more constructive your recommendation can be.
Personalize the letter - to help make the letter more personal, beforewriting a college recommendation letter, it is important to determine the personto whom the letter should be addressed. If the student is unaware of the name,the letter may begin "Dear Selection Committee."
Proofread the letter - one of the most important tips on how to write acollege recommendation letter is making sure to proofread it when finished. Aletter containing grammatical errors will appear unprofessional and may leave anegative impression.
Mailing the letter - establish with the student whether the recommendationletter must be mailed in an official envelope from your institution, or if itcan be included with the application. If it is to accompany the application,return the letter to the candidate in a sealed envelope.
Determine the deadline - double-check with the student as to the deadlineof the college recommendation letter. Ideally, you will be given an adequateamount of time to complete a positive, detailed letter, however, the mostimportant detail is that it is received before the application deadline.
Save the letter - when you have finished writing a recommendation, be sureto save it in order to help make writing the next college recommendation lettereasier. The student will likely be applying to more than one school and may askthat you write a separate recommendation for each one. Although it is importantthat each letter is tailored to the application at hand, select information canbe recycled for multiple letters. It is more convenient to tailor the originalpassage than to repetitively recollect the advice on how to write a collegerecommendation.
What Colleges Really Want
Colleges place a large emphasis on a student's academic ability becausewhat is accomplished in high school is the strongest predictor of their academicsuccess in college. What colleges really want, however, is a win-win situation.They want to admit students who will thrive at their institution, not only forthe student's benefit, but for their own as well. As more and more studentsbecome college-bound, colleges and universities will become increasinglyselective, placing more emphasis on the ability to know how to write a collegerecommendation letter.
As a teacher, counselor, employer or personal acquaintance of acollege-bound teen, you may at some point receive a request for help in writinga college recommendation letter. These students are not only placing their trustin you, they are putting you in the unique position to make an impact on whetheror not they are admitted to their college of choice. Following this advice onhow to write a college recommendation will help to ensure a professional letterand give your candidate a greater likelihood of being accepted into his or hercollege of choice.
College-Bound Student Information
CollegeView offers an extensive amount of valuable information andresources for the college-bound student. Please follow these links to discoverhow our publishings can help you in your choice for an educational pathway
Growing up in a modest village in China, I hardly ever had the chance tosee many examples of modern technology; people who dig wells by hand to obtaindrinking wateruse ox-driven plows to cultivate their fields don’t have much usefor televisiopersonal computers. But when my father gave me an old radio to playwith, I wanted nothing more than to take apart the contraptionsee what i idemade such interesting sounds. Sitting on the floor with a confused grin,surrounded by wiresmetal, I looked up at my fatheraskedthe noises were...
I first read this paragraphMadame Curie as a 14-year-old child,I stillremember how wonderful I felt. I remember thinking, "What esteemed men theywere! How hard they worked!" As I grew older, this paragraph became a source ofencouragement in the face of adversity. I begin to feel a magical blue lighttwinkling in my heart, kindling a love of science,encouraging me to chargebravely into the unknown world.
I am interested in the field of study of Organizational Behavior. In thepast， I have had the experience of working in settings where the people and thecorporate cultures of the companies were all different. I have found that thereis a great difference in the both the behaviors of people and of theirorganizations， depending on whether they are state-owned enterprises (SOEs)，large multinational firms， or small to medium sized foreign enterprises. Onesimple example is that of the ability of an employee to act independentlywithout direct instructions from his or her boss. In many Chinese organizations，acting without direct instructions is considered a form of disrespect towardsthe supervisor， who is generally offended by such behavior. In my experience andresearch， such organizations tend to have low operating efficiency with theemployees losing their innate ability to take the initiative.
I am a person keen on thinking and experiencing. My lively character andvigorous energy have made me very active in extracurricular events in which Ihave sought an all-round personal development. Sociology Studies will provide mewith the kind of constant real life thinking I have always craved, while helpingme to improve my analytical, practical & communication skills. Also myconcern and curiosity about society and its people inspired me to pursue thissubject for my higher education, as I believe Sociology Studies sums up a lot inthe changing nature of society.
My education has schooling my perception of society and people leading meto be acutely aware of social events, inequality, identities, cultures andreligious fundamentalism, especially in a society such as the one I come from -China. I was practicing in the Chinese Hope Project during summer holidays andvolunteered to investigate the issue of low educational attendance rate forfemale students in rural China with my tutor from my high school and that was avery good experience as it not only made me realise how traditional culturalinfluence could remain unchanged in some of those rural areas in China and alsothe way parents and children interacting. I always have wondered why for manyChinese students just like me, hundreds of them fail to choose what they reallywant to student and do as a career. Chinese parents are definitely havingstrange influences on their kids' decision making in terms of education andcareer or in the worst cases; the parents decided what their kids should dosolely. My mother believes that I should go for Finance studies, while I clearlyknow that my interest has never been in the Mathematical formulas and numbers, Ialways find the diversities of societies, people, beliefs, cultures and the waypeople interacting together very fascinating. So, during this summer, mythoughts kept returning on why I worked so unsuccessfully towards studyingfinance and economics as my mother expected? And how can I truly become my ownmaster by progressing a BA that I really like to engage more research and enrichmyself with? How did all the cultural and beliefs affecting the way we actingthe roles in the community? In which way an individual could actually build upand refine his/her identities?
In pursuing a Sociology degree, I seek answers to these questions. Athorough examination of the Sociology behind human behaves could reveal thebeliefs,values and identities; it enables us to exam and understand ourselvesbetter. While knowledge of Sociology will certainly benefit the social servicesproviding, I also maintain a passion for Culture Studies for that same reason.Cultural behaviour study appeals to me because it tells us why we act in acertain way - under a cultural atmosphere. Also for being in the UK for 3 years,the knowledge about the outside world has given me a unique and balancedperspective to examine the reality of Chinese society too. In this historicalepoch in which China is becoming closely integrated into the internationalcommunity and playing an influence role in the world arena, I wish to gaininsights into our society in its socio-culture aspects and to study how Chineseculture can respond to the globalization process.
By combining these thoughts into a good BA in Sociology degree programme, Ican pursue my professional goal of doing education and community service workfor the government and perhaps focusing in promote public welfare. My experiencein the past in social practices has not only equipped me with an intellectualfoundation for my future studies but has also supplied me with my career plans.In my eyes, China's several thousand years of history has given rise to thedeep-entrenched rule by man instead of rule by law and nature. In dealing withsuch issues like economic development, poverty elimination and the promotion oflaw, the framing and application of government policies seem to play a greaterrole. Therefore, it is obvious that to contribute to public welfare and tonational development, it is more realistic and useful to become a well-trainedand well-qualified public administrator. In this lies the motivation of myapplication for an undergraduate programme in sociology at your esteemeddepartment.
WanSheng High School where I was studying is a key provincial high schoolthat attracts best students from every part of the province. In fierce academiccompetitions, I have managed to remain top-ten in my high school academicperformance and was recommended by the school to Highbury College,Portsmouth tostudy my foundation course. I passed the foundation course successfully in 20__and was an outstanding student of my class. I believe that my previous socialpractices activities and academic preparations have built a solid background forme to further my intensive and fruitful research in your BA in Sociologystudies. After gaining knowledge of both Sociology and different cultures at thehighly regarded University of Leicester, I plan to work for social services touse my knowledge of social human behaviour to aid members of the public.
尊敬的老师：
您好!
我是中国的一名大学本科生，就读上海大学经济系。自20__年起，我关注世界大学的排名及各个学校的优势，产生了出国留学的念头，从小时候就听过剑桥大学。
剑桥大学的工商管理专业是全球非常知名的专业，同时本专业培养具备管理、经济、法律及企业管理方面的知识和能力，能在企、事业单位及政府部门从事管理以及教学、科研方面工作的工商管理学科高级专门人才。
所以我渴望加入到剑桥大学工商管理专业的'研究生行列中。在全球经济一体化进程中，中国将进一步带动国内市场经济的繁荣，拓展中国市场，缺乏现代管理理念指导的中国传统企业将面临严峻的挑战。所以中国的经济发展需要这样的人才。
在大学期间，我勤奋刻苦，认真学习，注重培养自己严谨的科学态度及独立的创新能力，力求学有专精，学以致用，经过大学本科三年多的学习，各科都取得了优异的成绩。因此，我一定能很好地完成留学课程。学成回国后，我一定能实现从事工商管理工作的愿望，并能在这事业上实现我的人生价值。
申请人：
年 月 日
I'M GOING RUNNING TODAY. I am not concerned about my calorie consumption forthe day， nor am I anxious to get in shape for the winter season. I just want togo running。
I used to dislike running. "If you don't win this game， you're all runningfive miles tomorrow，" the field hockey coach used to warn， during those lastdays of October when the average temperature seemed to be decreasingexponentially. And so， occasionally， my grief-stricken team would run numerousmiserable laps around the fields. At the end of these excursions， our faces andlimbs would be numb， and we would all have developed those notorious flu-likesymptoms; but the running made us better in the long run， I suppose.Nevertheless， I counted down the days until the end of the field hockey season，vowing never to put on a pair of running shoes again. Then I surprised myself bysigning up for outdoor track in the second half of sophomore year. I was foolishto have believed that I could ever escape this insidious and magneticaddiction。
Anyone would have thought that I'd be off the team in a few days， but thelast week of January caught me splashing through puddles of melted ice， andFebruary winds nearly blew me off the track. I looked forward to practices thistime around， to the claps and the persistent cheers of my fellow trackies. I wasfeeling a "runner's high" spurred by the endorphins released by exercise. But toattribute my affinity for running solely to chemistry diminishes the personalimportance that running has for me。
I like running—in the cool shade of the towering oak trees， and in the warmsunlight spilling over the horizon， and in the drops of rain falling gently fromthe clouds. Certain things become clear to me when I'm running—only whilerunning did I realize that "hippopo_____i" is possibly the funniest word in theEnglish language， and only while running did I realize that the travel sectionof The York Times does not necessarily provide an accurate depiction of theentire world. Running lends me precious moments to contemplate my life： whilerunning I find time to dream about changing the world， to think about recentdeath of a classmate， or to wonder about the secret to college admission。
Running is the awareness of hurdles between me and the finish line; runningis the desire to overcome them. Running is putting up with aches and pains，relishing the knowledge that， in the end， I will have built strength andendurance. Running is the instant clarity of vision with which I can see myfuture just one hundred yards in the distance; it is the understanding thatthese crucial steps will determine victory or defeat。
Running is not the most important thing in the world to me， but it is whatfulfills me when time permits. And right now， before the sun goes down， I liketo take advantage of the road that lies ahead。
wang is an impressive student because he has been forced to overcome thesignificant challenge of a serious illness during his freshman year. when ifirst met wang in my discrete math class, he did not appear to be anythingspecial to me. while his exam scores were good, they were not as high as i wouldnow expect of him. what i didn't know then was that due to his illness. wang wasattempting to take all of the difficult early mathematics courses at one time,including discrete mathematics, advanced mathematics, linear algebra, andpossibilities. while most
students found preparing for just one set of these exams difficult, wangwas overwhelmed by four of them. but in the end, he achieved an impressive scoreon the final exam, which made me conscious of his unusual determination hedemonstrates when confronting difficult challenges.
mr. wangi have often talked about a variety of mathematicscomputer scienceconceptsproblems. during these discussions, i always found him to bedelightfully intelligent. not only does he quickly understand the
conceptsproblems presented to him, he is able to analyze theseproblemspresent solutions. but perhaps most important is that wang's thinking isintensely rigorous. when looking at any question, he carefully scrutinizes itifhe finds any uncertain issues, he clears them up immediately. i believe thiskind of thought is essential to become an excellent computer programmer.
from: fan pu
department of the special class gifted for youths university of science andtechnology hefei, anhui 230026, p.r. china july 1, 1998 dear sir or madam:
i take great pleasure in recommending wang yong, one of my favoritestudents, for admission into your distinguished graduate program.
mr. wang was admitted in 1986 at 14 years of age into the special class forthe gifted youths, my university's unique program that caters to theintellectual needs of unusually talented chinese youngsters. it was a rareprivilege he earned with his nearly impeccable academic performance through theyears of his elementary and secondary school.
he impressed me almost as he entered into my university, a major cradle ofchina's scientific and technological talents. at the time, members of the giftedclass all had to spend half a month studying by themselves the principles ofcalculus and then take an exam so that we could evaluate their self-studycapability. mr. wang scored the highest grade in that exam. he also exhibited akeenly whetted mind during class discussions. to my regret at the time, hisenglish was not as good as his mathematics or physics. but i noticed he made apoint of working especially hard in improving his english during his fiveundergraduate years with us. by now, he seems to be at least as proficient inenglish as most of his former classmates in the gifted class.
in my experience with mr. wang, i was impressed with not only his
extraordinary intelligence but also his ambitions and persistence. i amsure that mr. wang will be an outstanding student in any doctoral program thathe may care to enroll in. so i would like to support him firmly in his questrecommendation into account when considering his application. i would greatlyappreciate it you decide to accept him as he wishes.
yours sincerely fan pu professor and deputy head.
"All I know about leadership I learned from . . ." What items could a person use to describe leadership qualities?
Inspired by the student council advisors at my high school.
Student council was a big part of my life in high school. I have participated in it since my frst year of high school. When I frst joined， I was quiet， na?ve， and unwilling to participate in many activities. I was scared to meet new people and afraid to apply myself. This all began to change. Half way through my frst year in student council， one of the advisors can up to me and asked why I did not participate that much. I did not have an answer for her and did not know how to respond. After this， I began to think of an answer. I became frustrated and decided to change. I started to show up at events and had a great time. I realized I loved this and wanted to start leading these activities. In my sophomore， junior， and now my senior year of high school， I asserted myself and took on a strong leadership role in student council. I did not fgure out the answer to why I was so reserved until this year with the help of this question.
When I looked up leadership in the dictionary， it said that it was the capacity to lead and the act or instance of leading. These are two very broad defnitions of leadership. Many people have different notions of what this word actually means. When I was challenged to use different items to describe what leadership actually is， I thought this was going to be a hard and obnoxious task. What could I learn from comparing leadership to a stuffed animal or a rubber chicken? But when I sat down to come up with a couple of answers， I realized that leadership could be compared to almost anything a person wants.
All I know about leadership I learned from a calculator. A calculator can add everything together to come up with the best answer. It can delet e what is unnecessary and only include what is important. It can solve any type of problem. These are all important equalities a leader has to have. A leader has to be able to add all of the ideas together to make the best possible plan. Leaders have to know how to decipher the good and the bad out of an idea. They have to be versatile and know how to deal with different types of issues.
All I know about leadership I learned from a ball. A ball is able to bounce back up after it is dropped. It is round and has no creases. A ball can be thrown back and forth to different people. All of these qualities are also leadership qualities. A leader has to be ready for every situation that is thrown at him or her. He or she has to be able to bounce back from any setbacks and never dwell on the past. Leaders have to exhibit many qualities and never be closed-minded about a situation. A leader must be able to delegate when he or she cannot get the work done. They have to trust everyone they lead to be able to "catch the ball" and keep a project rolling.
This activity made me realize that being a leader is so much more than just having authority and having the ability to take control of a situation. A leader has to be trusting of all the people he or she leads and， leaders must be able to combine ideas into one encompassing idea. They cannot sit in the background and watch events happen; they have to jump in and be involved. They should not delegate all their responsibilities away.
Leadership is more than what the dictionary says it is.
I learned through all of this that I have many of these qualities.
I have the ability to solve problems， lead through adversity， and be versatile. From answering this question， I realized that I could lead effectively， even if my leadership style is different from other individuals. When I joined student council in my frst year of high school， I did not have these qualities because I was never put into a situation where I had to lead. I was too reserved to try. When I tried， I learned that I could succeed in this. I did not realize until I answered this question about leadership. I was never able to see that being a leader is not just about taking control of a group and telling everyone what to do When I was a freshman， I thought leadership was this. I did not know that did not have to be forceful and strict. I stereotyped a leader then. Thisis where I went wrong. A leader is about being yourself and never letting anyone change you. I thought I had to change to be a good leaderOnly when I expanded my comfort zone did I realize this was not trueIt only took three years and a silly question/game to fgure this out.
此致
敬礼!
申请人：
__年__月__日
亲爱的教授：
我很高兴以书面形式推荐的医生的信。 __支持他申请在实验室的博士后位置。
博士。X__一个优秀的研究生致力于为毫秒我的监督下度。在我与他在大学接触，他的创造力和态度研究工作给了我很深的印象。他总是提出他的研究新的思路和可以解决他自己的问题，我很满意他。
__一直致力于高分子发光研究六年左右。据我所知，他的大部分研究都集中在生物分析化学在主人的工作，如蛋白质和核酸检测等，在这些领域，博士。X__有雄厚的背景和科研能力。他已经和将发表多篇论文在国际期刊。我在读他的论文发表和与他讨论往往兴趣。我很赞赏他的研究能力。
__博士还拥有非常优良品格。他是一个虔诚的科研工作者。他的作品是在周末。他是一个诚实和智能，可靠，负责人，并且是非常合作过。
基于这些优势，我相信这个年轻人将实现在今后的工作更大的学业成功。因此，我强烈支持他的应用程序，这将不胜感激，如果你能给他的优先考虑。
请随时联系我，如果我可以回答关于__的任何其他问题。我的地址如下：
教授__X
Dear Sir,
I am going to graduate from Department of Computer in Huabei University inJune next year. I am very eager to enter the Graduate School of your universitynext fall to study applied computer for Ph.D. degree.
I would appreciate it very much if you would send me a graduate catalog ofyour university and any other necessary information, and also a set ofapplication forms for admission. Thank you for your kind assistance.
Sincerely yours,
Wang Feng
尊敬的先生/女士：
你好
我是江苏省南京市x中学20x年高中毕业生，由于未被理想大学录取，我一直在x中学复读。自20x年起，我受同学的影响，产生了出国留学的念头，于是我通过上网了解到去新西兰留学有比较多的优势。
首先，新西兰是一个多元文化的国家，具有世界先进的教学水平;第二，留学费用比其他国家较低、较合理;第三，气候也与我国南方差不多。因此，我向父母提出拟到新西兰留学的愿望，得到了父母的支持。因为我是女孩子，从小就喜欢幼儿教育。且现代中国的家长对小孩的教育要求比较高，我如果能到新西兰学习幼儿教育专业课程，学成回国后一定能在幼儿教育事业上有作为。
所以，我决心到新西兰留学，打算先用半年的时间到语言学院专修英语，过好语言关，再进行幼儿教育专业课程学习。我相信我已经过三年高中课程的学习，又经过一年的复读，在学习能力和知识水平上有了一定的基础。同时我父母都有固定的工作和较丰厚的收入，在留学经费上也会得到父母的全力支持。因此，我一定能较好地完成留学课程。学成回国后，我一定能实现我从事幼儿教育的愿望，并能在幼儿教育事业上实现我的'人生价值。
此致
敬礼!
申请人：
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live in Pakistan-a country destroying itself with bombs,guns andgovernments' blabber to find justifications for what it is going through;acountry where a former president is murdered in public,where the nation'sconstitution and parliament are suspended at the same time,and where the voiceof a common man is unheard.
Since the last few years, I had aspired to become a doctor.The idea of"scalpels," "opened chests" and "sutures" had always intrigued me.And then ithappened!The recent unprecedented events in my country wiped off the dust ofdisillusionment from my eyes;I lost my will to become a doctor.However,theturmoil in the country led me towards newspapers and news channels,and hencePolitics.
As I involved myself into politics,I realized that it isall-embracive-wielding its way over social and economic life-it is theomnipotent of Pakistan.It can mobilize public opinion,gear up propagandamachinery,make or repeal laws and what not.Backed up by public opinion,supportedby the majority of the legislators,armed with the means to keep the people in astate of ignorance,political power crosses the limits of dictatorialpowers.Political power,like the most powerful intoxicant,makes the persons inpower to forget social ethics,political morality and obligations.
Most of the learned youth in this country consider Politics to be "a refugefor the scoundrels" and this derogatory remark may be true if we look at thedeceptive and degenerated type of politicians indulging in a dirty game.Allthese political parties are votaries of democracy,but the way they conductthemselves inside their own parties is nothing but senselessauthoritarianism.Therefore a very few students choose to pursue Politics as aprofession,but what they don't realize is that if we don't take a stand thesystem can never be changed.Thus,I want to study Politics so I can come back tomy country and contribute what little I can do for my homeland and its people.IfI can inspire even a single person,it would be worth it.The world today isgrowing global.We are now not only to think of our own nation but as and when wethink of it,we have to keep the international perception in mind;consequently,Ichose Politics with International Relations as one of my courses.
Studying in UK will breed a sense of individuality and self reliance.Iwould be able to interact with people from everywhere and get to know abouttheir culture.This would not only open new horizons for me,but would also clearsome preconceived notions one has about the other.I have always been an activeparticipant of debates.I have participated in 3 Model UN conferences out ofwhich I was awarded with the Best Delegate award in two. I was also one of thetwo students to be selected from my school to participate in the EnglishSpeaking Union '08.Moreover, I've taken part in Parliamentary style debatestoo.Therefore I believe I can communicate effectively in public and languagewill not be a barrier in my education.Furthermore, I have worked as an interneeat Al-Shifa Eye Hospital for a month in summers.Here I learnt how to deal withpatients,use the Auto Ref, handle files and punctuality.We also campaigned to aremote area near Murree where we helped the doctors in examining the patientsfree of cost.Another experience which taught me a lot was when me and my fellowcolleagues volunteered to paint walls for the SOS Children's Village.Inaddition,I worked with SUNGI (NGO) where a group of 5 of us had to organize anevent to pay tribute to 1000 Women for the Nobel Peace Prize.
I enjoy Literature,especially the works of Shakespeare,TennesseeWilliams,Thomas Hardy and Andrew Marvell.I'd be delighted to study in achallenging atmosphere where I can focus on my studies.I commit to my work andmy ability to think out of the box,keenness for Politics and my perception ofthings,I understand,gives me an edge over others.I believe in myself,and ifprovided with an opportunity,I'd make the university proud.
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尊敬的X大学老师：
您好!我是X，现就读于X。感谢您在百忙之中审阅我的留学申请书。
X大学，以怒蹄奔腾的骏马为标志物，希望学子们能“腾天潜渊，吐纳川海;辽阔原野，一任奔驰”，博大高远的追求使我渴慕不已，心神往之。我渴望成为X大学的一名学生。
由于在数学上表现出了优秀的能力，我5岁时上了小学。20X年时，我们全家来到北京，并开始了我在X学校长达8年的学习。这8年来，X见证着我点点滴滴的进步。来到北京前我对英语一无所知，可我的母校是一个国际化的学校，于是我的英语让老师和父母十分着急。后来在父母老师的帮助之下，我一直努力提高自己的英语水平，现在英语已经成为我的优势之一。小升初的时候，我的成绩还不是很好，在我初中三年的不懈努力之下，最终以中考523分(当时的市重点线)的成绩进入了我校高中部实验班。在高一时我的成绩在班里、年级的前列，参加了海淀区数学、物理、化学竞赛，并在第X届全国数学“希望杯”比赛中获得全国三等奖。进入高二之后，我在所有考试(包括月考、期中期末考、高三的周考、区统考)中都保持着班级第一、年级第一的成绩，而且整个高中年级的各科会考成绩都是A。我认为只要对学习有着严肃认真的态度，始终都在努力超越自我，就一定可以取得成功。而且我可以理性对待考试、不断提高自己的学习能力，从而保持了一个稳定的、向上的状态，我会将这种状态在我以后的学习、生活中继续保持下去。
我出生在一个民主开放的家庭。父母都是老师，给我一定的自由发展空间，并着重培养我的领悟能力、学习能力和动手能力，让我学会自立。于是我在遇到生活、学习、与人沟通相处等方面的困难时，都自己想办法独立解决，从而在各方面成为班级、年级的佼佼者。由于父母对我潜移默化的影响，我做事十分认真，习惯追求完美，虽然十分完美是不可能的，但是追求完美的态度和意志让我在学习、工作中有着出色的表现。
正如校训“X”所展示的，我的母校X学校，既秉承了传统教育的严谨、求实，也发扬了寄宿学校的军事化管理，更融入了外国教育的开放和高效。正是在这样的环境中，我拥有了丰富的知识、多样的能力、坚强的毅力和开朗的性格。在X年的学习生涯中，我更加成熟稳重，做事心思缜密、谋划周到，成为一个学习优秀、善于处理各方面事务、全面发展的人。
此致
敬礼!
申请人：
__年__月__日